Sunfrost || ShadowClan Deputy [audition]

[alcides]

Name: Sunfrost 
Short Description: Orange and white with bright, light-green eyes.
Age: 25 moons
Gender: She-cat
Family: n/a
Clan: ShadowClan
Rank: Deputy [ auditioning ]


Personality:     


    Sunfrost has eyes like a hawk, one could muse. She seems to always know what's happening around her without being informed because she pays close attention to every detail and will contemplate occurrences for their meaning or why they happened, should it be a mystery, long after the event itself. She is not happy with knowing what happened at a surface level, she wants to pull apart every thread and study the undertone. Pairing with this, she can be a bit suspicious. If she thinks something is up, she will never let it go until she finds out for certain that it is nothing. She doesn't want to risk the chance of something being left to fester by someone who thought it was a nonentity, only to have it resurface down the line.      
    It is important to her to get things done. You can find her early in the morning already up, ready to assist her leader with what needs to be done. Her diligence can sometimes be a downside to even her as she finds herself upset and even deeply troubled should she have had an unproductive day, For this reason, she always pushes others to do their duties along with herself, as she also believes the Clan must function as a team to be the most successful. She always puts the welfare of the Clan above her own, and does everything she does with the thought in mind of how this will effect her clanmates.
    She is incredibly loyal to her Clan, and although she would rather leave the other Clans to do as they do, she will not hesitate to get involved with her neighbors if it will benefit or protect ShadowClan. A negative quality of hers is how she sees the forest as ShadowClan against the world; she doesn't like to work with the other Clans and sees them as a constant challenge, for in her mind, without them around ShadowClan would have the entirety of the forest for their home and hunting grounds. Again, she prefers to pay them no mind, but if a situation presents itself, she has no problem doing what needs to be done and may get frustrated if her leader decides to let it go.     
    While she is not impulsive by any means, she does have some questionable things come out from her mouth that may make others think she is. She is not soft-spoken and will speak up against what she things is wrong or a bad decision, using tact but unwilling to dodge around the issue. 

History:      

    As a kit, Sunkit had a lonely existence. She was the only kit born to an older couple of warriors in ShadowClan, and soon after her birth, her father suffered an injury and was retired to the elders den. Her mother was the main cat she saw therefore, and she grew very close to the she-cat. She was given her name based on the sunny orange fur her mother loved so much on her. She spent a lot of time trying to sneak out of the nursery to say hello to the warriors and apprentices of the Clan seeing as the loneliness grew tiresome frequently.      
    When she became and apprentice, life seemed to look down upon the youngster. She acquired a mentor who was rumored to be an amazing cat, but Sunpaw saw quite a different side. The cat seemed to have no interest in training the growing she-cat, and therefore Sunpaw grew frustrated and irate with the cat. She was shy at this time, but it is said that this is the period where she developed her bold attitude. She would push and push for the cat to train her, until one day, the warrior passed from a deadly wound from a fox. Sunpaw felt remorse for the way she had treated the cat, but kept the fiery nature she had developed.    
    From then on she was trained under a different warrior, Mousefur, who was a lovely young she-cat. This period in her life is rather dull, as her mentor was a relatively average she-cat and trained Sunpaw to the best of her ability. In a bit over six months since she had became an apprentice, Sunpaw became Sunfrost.    
    Her warrior name was chosen much like her prefix, as her white fur made her leader think of the leaf-bare frosts. After her warrior ceremony, she was soon given an apprentice by the name of Duckpaw. The Clan was short of warriors to train, so although the she-cat was young, their leader at the time agreed to give her a cat to train. She did her best to pass down everything she had learned to Duckpaw, and it wasn't long until she was made a warrior too. Repeat this again with another apprentice, Meadowpaw, and it takes you to barely a couple moons before this current date.    
    At the passing of the last leader, and under the leadership of their current leader, Sunfrost was named deputy. She was young compared to other deputies in the other Clans, and sometimes would receive a hard time for this, but the leader felt that she had done a great job with her past apprentices and that Sunfrost's qualities matched the leaders in such a way that they would make an excellent team to be in the high-ranks of the Clan. She has only been in her position for a couple of moons so she is still learning the ropes, but handles her duties better than even she expected. 


OOC name: alcides
Other Characters: None right now.

[edward ✿]

Mostly the bio looks fine!
One issue I see is cold isnt an acceptable prefix, its too strongly associated with death/dying and is very unlikely a queen would name her kit after something that could kill it. Sorry! Besides that, everything is fantastic

[alcides]

Sorry about that! Fixed it up, hopefully it all looks good now.

[edward ✿]

Looks good, accepted!