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Post by Flameh on Mar 31, 2015 18:30:59 GMT
 Name: Flamewhisker
Short Description: Flamewhisker is a fluffy creamy-ish orange maincoon, with darker cream-orange stripes. She has a white-creamy tailtip, paws, chest, and belly, with slightly unseeable spots. Flamewhisker has bright olive-green eyes. Her fur is smooth, but it gets dirty from the mess she gets in. Flamewhisker's white paws are creamy looking when it fades in slightly, but they are kinda like socks that twolegs put on their feet. Her pad color is light pink, so is her nose. In Flamewhisker's pads are white fluffy tuft-like fur sticking up in between her pad.
(Short Version: Fluffy creamy orange maincoon, with olive-green eyes.)
Age: 37 Moons
Gender: She-cat
Family: Can't remember the names.
Clan: Riverclan
Rank: Warrior
Personality: Flamewhisker can be sassy at times, but most of the time she is helpful, and friendly. She acts like she was a kittypet when you get on her nerves, but she is friendly most of the time. Flamewhisker acts like an elder when she's annoyed, and tired along with acting like a kittypet. She aims on being a very nice she-cat, but she sometimes ignores the goal, or forgets about it. Flamewhisker has a short-ish high temper, but she tries her best to control her temper. She may be thought as a mean cat, but you just don't know her really well to know she's actually friendly, but has some bad sides. Flamewhisker is soft to younger cats, but can be stern if it's needed. She is also very outgoing with other cats, but not too much.
History: Flamewhisker was a very curious kit when she was very young. She was SO annoying to everyone. Flamewhisker's sister died when she was an apprentice, which made her very unhappy for a while. Her only sister that's alive left the clan to be a loner for some odd reason. As Flamewhisker grew into a very interesting cat in the clan, her mentor found how how great she was good at hunting, soon she became a warrior. When she became a warrior, many things happened, such as her finding her only sister on a patrol, they chased her out of the territory. Even though Flamewhisker never saw her parents ever again, she is still her happy self.
Lets go back to when she was a kit. Her sister's names were Gingerkit, and Amberkit. Flamewhisker was the oldest of the litter. She doesn't know her father, because he was a kittypet. When Flamewhisker became an apprentice, her mentor was Whiteclaw. One day, she found a loner stealing some land prey from the territory she, and her mentor had to chase it out as best as they can, but soon it became a fight. Gingerpaw was with her then, because at that time there weren't many warriors. The loner almost killed Gingerpaw, but atleast Flamewhisker(Flamepaw) was able to rush back with her little sister. She hurried back, but it was too late. Gingerpaw died from blood loss. Flamewhisker was very upset, but soon she recovered.
Moons after that, she became a warrior. She forgot about Gingerpaw's death, and continued her clan life in Riverclan. Amberpaw left the clan after Flamewhisker became a warrior, and her. Flamewhisker only saw her once in a border patrol, and had to chase her out, but she didn't know it was her.... Soon, she relized it was her. Flamewhisker went out to look for her again, but she got in trouble for going out alone, but during the sneaking out she was attacked by the same loner, but she managed to hurry back to camp.
OOC name: Flame
Other Characters: -
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Post by edward ✿ on Mar 31, 2015 22:38:32 GMT
A few things! First please make the short description only a sentence (ex. "a Grey tabby tom with green eyes")
Next, your personality and history combined needs to total at least 400 words. Once those things are fixed let me know and ill check again. Thanks!
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Post by Flameh on Mar 31, 2015 22:47:29 GMT
Sorry to tell you this, but I can't join if the personality is atleast 400 words, along with history. Flamewhisker is hard to make a short desc for, because she has un-noticeable details in her looks.
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Post by edward ✿ on Mar 31, 2015 23:00:00 GMT
it would be 400 total between personality and history combined, not both 400. please fix this, it was stated how much needs to be typed in the bio form.
and the short description needs to be only a sentence or two long, just for purposes of listing clan allegiances.
thanks!
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Post by Flameh on Mar 31, 2015 23:19:43 GMT
Oh. Thanks for that! EDIT: Editted it! edward ✿ |
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Post by edward ✿ on Apr 1, 2015 1:42:32 GMT
Looks good, thanks! Accepted
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