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Post by calico on Apr 2, 2015 16:25:27 GMT
Name: Silvertorn Short Description: Beautiful silver she-cat with blue eyes Age: Twenty-Five Moons Gender: She-Cat Family: Mother-Silverflower(deceased), Father-Ashfeather(deceased) Clan: ThunderClan Rank: Warrior
Personality: Don't allow her beauty fool you, Silvertorn can be a ruthless fighter. She has a reputation for savagely defending her clan. Her battles have been so intense, she has broken the warrior code. Some may call her simple minded at times. She doesn't agree with taken in kitty-pets and outsiders. She feels it's a stain against ThunderClan's bloodline. She sees anybody who is not a ThunderClanner as a threat, and will take them out. Silvertorn is not a blood thirsty murder though. She will follow her leader's wishes even if she disagrees.
She has a fear of being alone. Being isolated by herself for long periods of time can cause her to have panics attacks. She gets dizzy and feels as if her heart is going to bust out of her chest. The Clan is her life. The thought of seeing any harm done to her clan gets her wheezy. This is where she gets her passion from. She turns every ounce of fear into anger. When shes in battle, she cannot show any fear for the sake of her clan-mates' safety.
Silvertorn is only heated in the mist of danger. At camp or just sharing tongues with a fellow clan-mate during a patrol, she is friendly. She loves having company around and enjoys chatting with elders. She may be kind to her own, but she be stern. Elders have many moons of experience Silvertorn wants to learn. She loves learning the secrets of her clan, especially the history. She has excellent memory and can rescite many of the elder's stories. She wishes to have an apprentice to teach because she believes she can make a great mentor.
Although she is quick to attack an outside, she would never harm a kit. Kits are Silvertorn's soft spot. It would not be unusual for her to go into the nursery and play with the kits. Sometimes she can "act like an elder" telling the kits all kinds of stories and making them listen to their mother. Her goal in life is to protect her clan and one day have kits of her own.
History: Silvertorn's mother and father were young warriors of ThunderClan. Her mother, Silverflower, was an extremely small she-cat known for her beauty and hunting skills. Her father, Greytorn, was an excellent climber and scout, into he broke his leg. He lived in the elder's den, unable to run anymore. They were both grew up together, around the same age. It was obvious to the clan they were going to be together, even as apprentices.
Silverflower's tiny body could not handle the trauma of birth. She gave birth to three stillborns and one sickly kit before she passed on into StarClan. Even though Greytorn was stick with grief, he was a proud father. He gave her all the love in the world. He named her after her mother. Greytorn taught her to be proud of her clan and would tell her many stories on how the clan came to be.
As an apprentice she would always stay in the elder's den longer than she was suppose too. She loved listening to the stories of the other elders and being with her father. The queen that nursed her did not act motherly towards Silvertorn, so she grew up without a motherly figure. That didn't effect her attitude though. She was a good apprentice- following the rules, active learner, and got along with everybody.
After asking permission from her mentor she ventured into the woods to hunt, and went to Shinningrocks. Suddenly there was a flash flood that swooped her up. Somehow she manage to get on land. Dazed, she accidently stumbled into a deep rabbit hole. She stood down there for three days before a RiverClan patrol heard her cries for help. This is where her fear of isolation stems from. She explained what happened and was accompanied back to ThunderClan.
When she was returned to the clan she learned that her father died. He went into Tall Pines looking for her, and was ran over my a twoleg monster. She distanced herself from the clan and lost some weight. After a couple of weeks, Silvertorn slowly progressed back to her former self. She continued being a good apprentice and really focused on fighting.
Soon later she the name Silvertorn was given the name Torn in honor of her father. A couple of moons went by and fought in many battles. She was respected by the clan and now she is in present time.
OOC name: Calico
Other Characters: Rustpaw
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Post by edward ✿ on Apr 2, 2015 18:29:11 GMT
Looks good, besides intentionally killing another cat like that. An accidental death is serious enough let alone murdering a cat after they have given up. Edit that and she should be good!
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Post by calico on Apr 4, 2015 0:43:01 GMT
I edited it. Better now? ^^
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Post by edward ✿ on Apr 5, 2015 2:53:13 GMT
looks great, accepted!
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